Revised disclosure on "Third Party Services"

tumblr · Jan 24, 2014 · 7a77fbc · 7a77fbc
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@@ -18,14 +18,12 @@ What This Privacy Policy Covers
  that we share with our partners.
 
  This Privacy Policy does not apply to the practices of third parties that we
- do not own or control, including but not limited to any third party
- websites, services and applications ("Third Party Services") that you elect
- to access through the Service or to individuals that we don't manage or
- employ. While we try to facilitate access only to those Third Party Services
- that share our respect for your privacy, we don't take responsibility for
- the content or privacy policies of those Third Party Services. We encourage
- you to carefully review the privacy policies of all Third Party Services you
- access.
+ do not own, control, or manage, including but not limited to any third party
+ websites, services, applications, or businesses ("Third Party Services").
+ While we try to work only with those Third Party Services that share our
+ respect for your privacy, we don't take responsibility for the content or
+ privacy policies of those Third Party Services. We encourage you to carefully
+ review the privacy policies of all Third Party Services you access.
 
  Also: This Privacy Policy also doesn't govern what our users do on their
  Tumblr blogs and we aren't responsible for the information collection and use
@@ -73,16 +71,12 @@ What We Collect and How We Use It
 
  Information Obtained from Third Party Services:
 
- In some cases, when you connect your Account with your accounts on Third
- Party Services, we may obtain information about you from those Third Party
- Services. Such information could include, for example, your gender, if you
- have disclosed that information to that third party and made it available
- for Tumblr to access. To the extent we obtain such information, we may use
- the information about you that we receive from Third Party Services to
- improve and personalize the Services. As a general practice, we strongly
- urge you to make careful judgments about any personal information you
- disclose to Internet services, including Tumblr and linked Third Party
- Services, regardless of whether you choose to link your accounts together.
+ In some cases, we partner with Third Party Services that may provide
+ information about you. Such information could include, for example, your
+ gender, if you have disclosed that information to that third party and made
+ it available for Tumblr to access. To the extent we obtain such
+ information, we may use it to develop new Services or to improve or enhance
+ the Services.
 
  User Content: