Unable to commission: restructure to improve readability #37553
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📝 WalkthroughWalkthroughThe changes update the troubleshooting documentation for commissioning Matter devices. The revised content now includes a detailed symptom and cause section that explains issues during device commissioning, including problems with device discovery and random unavailability. It also outlines remedy steps focusing on correct VLAN configuration and network settings, addressing potential issues with IPv6, mDNS, multicast filtering, and IGMP snooping. Previous content has been replaced with this structured explanation. Changes
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422-424: Improve Symptom Description Clarity
The current symptom text is clear but could be rephrased for better flow. For example, instead of:The initial {% term commissioning %} keeps failing, you experience issues with discovering devices, or devices become unavailable randomly.consider:
-The initial {% term commissioning %} keeps failing, you experience issues with discovering devices, or devices become unavailable randomly. +The initial {% term commissioning %} frequently fails, leading to issues with device discovery and occasional unavailability.This revision improves readability by clearly separating the two issues.
426-430: Refine Cause Explanation Details
The cause section is informative. Please verify the IGMP abbreviation: the title attribute currently reads"Internet Group Management Protocol i"which appears to include an extraneous "i". It might be clearer as follows:- (malfunctioning) <abbr title="Internet Group Management Protocol i">IGMP</abbr> snooping. + (malfunctioning) <abbr title="Internet Group Management Protocol">IGMP</abbr> snooping.Additionally, consider using consistent case in the bullet list (e.g. "multicast filtering" in lowercase).
431-437: Enhance Remedy Steps for Readability
The remedy section is comprehensive. To clarify step 1, you could simplify the phrasing and remove the dual abbreviation unless both are intentionally required. For example:-1. Make sure that Matter devices that use Wi-Fi (including Thread border routers) are on the same <abbr title="local area networks">VLANs</abbr>/<abbr title="virtual local area networks">VLAN</abbr> as Home Assistant. +1. Ensure Matter devices using Wi-Fi (including Thread border routers) are on the same VLAN as Home Assistant.This change removes redundancy and improves clarity.
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