User contributions for Tozar80
A user with 931 edits. Account created on 10 January 2013.
4 July 2022
- 01:2201:22, 4 July 2022 diff hist +12 Smallpox vaccine →Stockpiles
- 01:2101:21, 4 July 2022 diff hist 0 Smallpox vaccine Rearranged to put information on current vaccines together at beginning of article.
- 00:5800:58, 4 July 2022 diff hist +2,931 Smallpox vaccine →Vaccine stockpiles
3 July 2022
- 23:1623:16, 3 July 2022 diff hist +27 Smallpox vaccine →Third-generation
- 23:1523:15, 3 July 2022 diff hist +382 Smallpox vaccine →Third-generation
- 22:4822:48, 3 July 2022 diff hist −248 Smallpox vaccine →First-generation: Removed duplicate citation.
- 04:3704:37, 3 July 2022 diff hist −86 Smallpox vaccine →Third-generation
- 04:3604:36, 3 July 2022 diff hist −92 Smallpox vaccine →Third-generation
- 04:3404:34, 3 July 2022 diff hist +373 Smallpox vaccine →First-generation
- 04:3104:31, 3 July 2022 diff hist −11 Smallpox vaccine →Types
- 04:2204:22, 3 July 2022 diff hist +5,656 Smallpox vaccine →Types: Expanded section to discuss many more vaccines. Reorganized by type instead of brand name.
13 June 2022
- 02:5002:50, 13 June 2022 diff hist +6 Smallpox vaccine Reverted vaccine_type. Template value does not display correctly.
- 02:4702:47, 13 June 2022 diff hist −919 Smallpox vaccine Removed second infobox. Data is already in the infobox at the top of the page.
- 00:0400:04, 13 June 2022 diff hist +2,366 Smallpox vaccine →Origin: Updated with more evidence of horsepox origin, which has been accepted by the leading virology textbook.
4 June 2022
- 04:4304:43, 4 June 2022 diff hist +35 Battle of the Coral Sea →Forces available for Midway
- 04:4304:43, 4 June 2022 diff hist +2 m Battle of the Coral Sea →Forces available for Midway
- 04:4104:41, 4 June 2022 diff hist 0 Battle of the Coral Sea →Forces available for Midway
- 04:3904:39, 4 June 2022 diff hist +21 Battle of the Coral Sea →Midway: Renamed section.
- 04:3804:38, 4 June 2022 diff hist +895 Battle of the Coral Sea →Midway: Rearanged paragraphs to keep Japanese preparation together and US preparation together. Improved explanation of repairs to ''Yorktown''.
- 03:3703:37, 4 June 2022 diff hist −490 Battle of the Coral Sea Condensed and rearranged lead section to 4 paragraphs of reasonable length. (MOS:LEADLENGTH, MOS:PARA)
20 December 2021
- 04:1704:17, 20 December 2021 diff hist +21 Austro-Hungarian Navy No edit summary
- 04:1504:15, 20 December 2021 diff hist −540 Georg von Trapp Fixed broken and duplicate citations.
- 04:0304:03, 20 December 2021 diff hist +1 m Do-Re-Mi →Austrian version with letters
- 03:4003:40, 20 December 2021 diff hist −730 Austro-Hungarian Navy Removed more unnecessary detail from lead section. The article is not about the Otranto Barrage or the formation of Austria-Hungary either. All four paragraphs are now reasonable lengths.
- 03:2903:29, 20 December 2021 diff hist −1,266 Austro-Hungarian Navy Removed unnecessary detail to condense the paragraphs in the lead section. This article is about the Austro-Hungarian Navy, not the collapse of Austria-Hungary, and not the Yugoslav museum ship ''Bodrog''.
- 03:2803:28, 20 December 2021 diff hist +902 Edelweiss (song) →Austrian attitudes: Fixed broken citation.
- 03:0803:08, 20 December 2021 diff hist −1,161 Georg von Trapp Removed citation with excessively long quotation. Removed duplicate New York Times citation.
- 03:0403:04, 20 December 2021 diff hist +2,713 Edelweiss (song) Created new section for Austrian attitudes.
- 02:4302:43, 20 December 2021 diff hist −1 m The Sound of Music (film) →Historical accuracy: Corrected boldfacing.
- 02:4202:42, 20 December 2021 diff hist +266 The Sound of Music (film) →Historical accuracy
- 02:3502:35, 20 December 2021 diff hist +1 m The Sound of Music (film) →Historical accuracy
- 02:3402:34, 20 December 2021 diff hist −56 The Sound of Music (film) →Historical accuracy: Improved awkward sentence that had five clauses. Remove unnecessary detail about intermediate points.
- 02:3002:30, 20 December 2021 diff hist +1 The Sound of Music (film) →Historical accuracy: Three shorter paragraphs are better than two excessively long paragraphs. Title does not belong in paragraph about the film overstating the family's lifestyle, since the film understates his title, but it transitions well to his naval career. Personality traits of Maria von Trapp do not belong in paragraph about naval career.
- 02:2002:20, 20 December 2021 diff hist +529 The Sound of Music (film) →Historical accuracy: Explained social significance of noble rank.
- 02:1202:12, 20 December 2021 diff hist +28 m Georg von Trapp →top
- 02:0902:09, 20 December 2021 diff hist −5 Ritter No edit summary
- 02:0502:05, 20 December 2021 diff hist −21 Austrian nobility →Freiherr/Freifrau/Freiin (baron/baroness): Removed Ritter von Trapp. See explanation at Georg von Trapp.
- 02:0202:02, 20 December 2021 diff hist +640 Georg von Trapp Improved explanation of the title of Baron. Moved explanation into the same footnote as Ritter.
- 01:2801:28, 20 December 2021 diff hist +21 m The Sound of Music (film) →Tourism and Austrian apathy
- 01:2401:24, 20 December 2021 diff hist −29 The Sound of Music (film) →Tourism and Austrian apathy: Corrected visitor count to year of publication.
- 01:1801:18, 20 December 2021 diff hist −120 The Sound of Music (film) →Historical accuracy: Fixed efn error by changing it to refn. Removed information that duplicated another Note.
- 00:3000:30, 20 December 2021 diff hist −76 The Sound of Music (film) →Historical accuracy: Removed uncited claim that Trapp had no marketable skills. He had run a shipping line.
- 00:2800:28, 20 December 2021 diff hist +83 The Sound of Music (film) →Historical accuracy: Changed incorrect plot point. Film ends with Nazis forcing Trapp to join the navy, not arresting him. Added citation needed for claim not found in source.
- 00:2500:25, 20 December 2021 diff hist +617 The Sound of Music (film) →Historical accuracy: War record is important to explain why the Nazis wanted him. He did not just have experience with submarines, but he was one of the best.
- 00:1900:19, 20 December 2021 diff hist −92 The Sound of Music (film) →Historical accuracy: Removed sentence that I added. Sentence is out of place in a paragraph that talks about similarities with the West German film, rather than differences. Section already contains a whole paragraph that explains the changes to the children's names.
- 00:1500:15, 20 December 2021 diff hist −115 The Sound of Music (film) →Historical accuracy: Improved readability by removing duplicate details and combining three sentences. "Although" is better than "moreover" to show contrast.
- 00:1300:13, 20 December 2021 diff hist −91 The Sound of Music (film) →Historical accuracy: Removed incorrect description of Ritter as baronetcy. See citations in Ritter and Georg von Trapp.
- 00:0800:08, 20 December 2021 diff hist +2 m The Sound of Music (film) →Tourism and Austrian apathy
- 00:0700:07, 20 December 2021 diff hist +6,127 The Sound of Music (film) →Legacy: Austrian apathy toward the musical and film-related tourism.
19 December 2021
- 23:1923:19, 19 December 2021 diff hist −91 The Sound of Music (film) →Historical accuracy: Changed subsection grouping. Tag: Reverted
