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6 November 2023
- 08:5808:58, 6 November 2023 diff hist −15 Chris Foss →Diary of a Spaceperson: Add {{More citations needed section|date=November 2023}}. Remove individual {{Citation needed}}‘s. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
12 August 2023
- 21:3321:33, 12 August 2023 diff hist −1 Sharpeville massacre Partial revert of 00:47, 21 March 2023 edit by Patar knight. Wiktionary defines "massacre" as " The killing of a considerable number (usually limited to people) where little or no resistance can be made, with indiscriminate violence, without necessity, and contrary to civilized norms." Since "Massacre" is in the name of this event, it implies the event involved killing, and not merely shooting.
3 August 2023
- 09:1309:13, 3 August 2023 diff hist +4 MP4 file format With narrow screens (such as on phones) it wasn’t clear that 2 organizations are listed. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
2 August 2023
- 04:5604:56, 2 August 2023 diff hist −1 Gobi Desert →Desertification: The program is ongoing not past tense. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:5004:50, 2 August 2023 diff hist +4 Lop Nur Intro: Linkify toponym Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
30 July 2023
- 16:4516:45, 30 July 2023 diff hist +121 Andrew Madoff →Biography: Remove uncited theorizing about cause of death. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:2716:27, 30 July 2023 diff hist +34 UUNET Intro: Citation needed - “ Today, UUNET is an internal brand of Verizon Business” Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:2416:24, 30 July 2023 diff hist −42 UUNET Intro: Combine like information. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 03:4903:49, 30 July 2023 diff hist +13 Windows Hardware Error Architecture The article doesn’t even mention ACPI Platform Error Interface, so simply mentioning that Linux supports it in an article about an unrelated Windows technology is a non-sequitur more appropriate for a See Also section. Massage it a bit. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
29 July 2023
- 08:0108:01, 29 July 2023 diff hist −114 Copland (operating system) Citation only mentions “feature creep”. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 07:5507:55, 29 July 2023 diff hist −23 Copland (operating system) Rephrase some subtly editorialized text. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
28 July 2023
- 18:4718:47, 28 July 2023 diff hist +37 Steve Jackson (British game designer) Infobox: Linkify.
25 July 2023
- 00:1300:13, 25 July 2023 diff hist −30 Atom RPG →See also: Remove Metro 2033 (video game) - See Also isn't for a catalogue of apocalypse + USSR games. Leaving Fallout series since article mentions that it was inspiration for the game.
20 July 2023
- 00:4800:48, 20 July 2023 diff hist +395 Talk:MDMA →Edit request 19 July 2023: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit New topic
- 00:2300:23, 20 July 2023 diff hist +201 Operation Paperclip Intro: Add "News media revealed the program as early as December 1946." Citation: NYT.
22 June 2023
- 07:0907:09, 22 June 2023 diff hist +4 Gram →Uses: Uses: "May be measured" was ambiguous here in the context of a Standard Unit, as the phrase can connote permissibility in addition to probability. Changed to "are often measured". Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 07:0307:03, 22 June 2023 diff hist −73 Gram Intro: The definition of the Planck constant ", which is {{val|6.62607015|e=-34}} kg⋅m<sup>2</sup>⋅s<sup>−1</sup>" means nothing to a layperson. (Inverted _second_? What does time have to do with it?) Removed. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
31 May 2023
- 18:0518:05, 31 May 2023 diff hist +4 Robert H. Jackson Intro: Linkify Antonin Scalia
- 17:5117:51, 31 May 2023 diff hist +17 Robert H. Jackson Intro: "Reading law" isn't a term known by the general population. Change wording to write for a general audience.
25 April 2023
- 22:5022:50, 25 April 2023 diff hist +40 Factitious disorder imposed on self →See also: Add List of Munchausen by proxy cases.
20 March 2023
- 07:0407:04, 20 March 2023 diff hist +33 Soap opera Intro: "The term was preceded by "horse opera"..." Citation needed.
17 March 2023
- 03:0303:03, 17 March 2023 diff hist −57 AppleScript →See also: Remove BBEdit link. There are many scriptable pieces of software. See Also isn’t the place for a list of them.
27 February 2023
- 19:0119:01, 27 February 2023 diff hist −1 Salutation Intro: "is wed by" -> "includes". The former is not a phrase that has much meaning, nor is it used frequently.
24 January 2023
- 01:4501:45, 24 January 2023 diff hist −353 Box-drawing characters →Unix, CP/M, BBS: Remove unnecessary Bash script, per https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Template:How-to .
3 January 2023
- 07:5607:56, 3 January 2023 diff hist −44 Arkabutla, Mississippi Intro: Remove uncited pronunciation claim. (Looking at edit history, this appears to be a subject of disagreement. Only *cited* information belongs here.)
30 December 2022
- 05:0405:04, 30 December 2022 diff hist −8 The Hunger Games: Mockingjay – Part 2 Intro: Remove unnecessary comma. Split overly lengthy sentence.
24 December 2022
- 07:1507:15, 24 December 2022 diff hist +25 Apple silicon →Apple A4: Linkify PoP
19 December 2022
- 21:3321:33, 19 December 2022 diff hist +71 Macintosh Toolbox →Advent and implementation: «Apple chose ''1010'' (hexadecimal ''A'')» is neither complete nor specific enough. Correcting.
- 21:0821:08, 19 December 2022 diff hist −211 Cocoa (API) →Other bindings: Refactor after moving text from intro.
- 21:0321:03, 19 December 2022 diff hist +77 Cocoa (API) Intro and Other bindings sections: The intro was overly verbose: the list of 3rd-party bindings is unnecessary. Moved to "Other bindings". Will refactor the text next.
18 December 2022
- 23:0223:02, 18 December 2022 diff hist −33 Gorean subculture →Background: Resolve {{By whom|date=December 2022}} with "Fans allege..."
- 23:0123:01, 18 December 2022 diff hist +31 Gorean subculture Background: Add {{By whom|date=December 2022}} to "It is alleged..."
17 November 2022
- 15:0115:01, 17 November 2022 diff hist −36 Kerberos (protocol) →Microsoft Windows: Without a citation for Microsoft's intent to "extinguish" Kerberos, this link to EEE is original research.
16 November 2022
- 17:2517:25, 16 November 2022 diff hist +33 Yellowcake boomtown A google search shows that usages of "Yellowcake boomtown" are limited to this page and perhaps a single news article not using it as a proper noun. Add {{Neologism|date=November 2022}} . ("in such a manner as to promote it" in the template text is unproven but I have no control over that.)
- 16:2016:20, 16 November 2022 diff hist −68 Balkanization Intro: Revert 20:01, 16 September 2022 edit by 201.172.234.23 (See https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Balkanization&diff=1110671945&oldid=1103738141 ). It made the sentence ungrammatical. It's uncited.
1 September 2022
- 18:3718:37, 1 September 2022 diff hist −67 C11 (C standard revision) →Changes from C99: AFAICT, `quick_exit`'s use is orthogonal to a failure in `exit`. Removing "... if termination with <code>exit</code> fails".
24 August 2022
- 06:4706:47, 24 August 2022 diff hist −9 Alicia Silverstone →Personal life: "Complete" is meaningless here. Removed.
22 July 2022
- 06:2106:21, 22 July 2022 diff hist +85 Lepanto, Arkansas →Notable people: Normalize formatting (hopefully correctly); copyedit; linkify
20 July 2022
- 07:1607:16, 20 July 2022 diff hist +3 I, Pencil Move reprint information later in the article, so that essential information appears prior.
12 July 2022
- 15:3915:39, 12 July 2022 diff hist 0 Yellowcake boomtown Intro: Move {{Citation needed}} to the correct sentence.
- 15:3815:38, 12 July 2022 diff hist +34 Yellowcake boomtown Intro sentence: Citation needed. "Yellowcake boomtown" appears to be a neologism with no usages outside this article.
- 15:2515:25, 12 July 2022 diff hist −5 Ghost town →Oceania: File:Ruins at Farina.JPG Use more encyclopediac language for caption.
29 May 2022
- 07:1607:16, 29 May 2022 diff hist −23 Remote Imaging Protocol →See also: See Also: Remove Gopher (protocol). A text-only internet protocol isn’t relevant to a graphical BBS (essentially) file format. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
27 May 2022
- 00:5700:57, 27 May 2022 diff hist +19 Multipath TCP Intro: Maximize *throughput*, not resource usage. (It was a funny joke though.)
26 May 2022
- 01:1301:13, 26 May 2022 diff hist −187 Preußens Gloria Undid revision 1089657962 by GeoFan795 (talk) Not constructive. Tag: Undo
24 May 2022
- 00:4700:47, 24 May 2022 diff hist −11 Telegram (software) The subsequent sentence - that Telegram can read the contents - means that chats aren’t E2E encrypted by definition. Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit
21 May 2022
- 08:4008:40, 21 May 2022 diff hist −147 Tornado climatology →Europe: Europe: Remove irrelevant information. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
4 May 2022
- 19:5019:50, 4 May 2022 diff hist +18 CHNOPS Intro: Linkify covalent
13 March 2022
- 07:1307:13, 13 March 2022 diff hist −832 Blue laws in the United States →Missouri: Remove section. Missouri blue laws were eliminated in 2021. See https://www.stltoday.com/news/local/govt-and-politics/missouri-to-lift-limits-on-sunday-booze-sales/article_f078685c-40d1-5ab1-b67b-9f5d032b401c.html Tag: section blanking
- 06:4906:49, 13 March 2022 diff hist −12 Glengarry Glen Ross Intro: Remove "undesirable" from "two undesirable real estate developments". Glengarry is desirable and Glen Ross is undesirable. (See 2nd sentence in intro: "Glengarry Highlands is the prime real estate everyone is attempting to sell now; Glen Ross Farms is mentioned by several characters as having been very lucrative for those selling it several years ago.")