From 7a77fbc77e6b68a05e90cbb2b8f14a3ad98c6a29 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Chris M Johnson Date: Fri, 24 Jan 2014 00:33:26 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Revised disclosure on "Third Party Services" --- privacy-policy.txt | 30 ++++++++++++------------------ 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-) diff --git a/privacy-policy.txt b/privacy-policy.txt index cc12283..6d9e8b0 100644 --- a/privacy-policy.txt +++ b/privacy-policy.txt @@ -18,14 +18,12 @@ What This Privacy Policy Covers that we share with our partners. This Privacy Policy does not apply to the practices of third parties that we - do not own or control, including but not limited to any third party - websites, services and applications ("Third Party Services") that you elect - to access through the Service or to individuals that we don't manage or - employ. While we try to facilitate access only to those Third Party Services - that share our respect for your privacy, we don't take responsibility for - the content or privacy policies of those Third Party Services. We encourage - you to carefully review the privacy policies of all Third Party Services you - access. + do not own, control, or manage, including but not limited to any third party + websites, services, applications, or businesses ("Third Party Services"). + While we try to work only with those Third Party Services that share our + respect for your privacy, we don't take responsibility for the content or + privacy policies of those Third Party Services. We encourage you to carefully + review the privacy policies of all Third Party Services you access. Also: This Privacy Policy also doesn't govern what our users do on their Tumblr blogs and we aren't responsible for the information collection and use @@ -73,16 +71,12 @@ What We Collect and How We Use It Information Obtained from Third Party Services: - In some cases, when you connect your Account with your accounts on Third - Party Services, we may obtain information about you from those Third Party - Services. Such information could include, for example, your gender, if you - have disclosed that information to that third party and made it available - for Tumblr to access. To the extent we obtain such information, we may use - the information about you that we receive from Third Party Services to - improve and personalize the Services. As a general practice, we strongly - urge you to make careful judgments about any personal information you - disclose to Internet services, including Tumblr and linked Third Party - Services, regardless of whether you choose to link your accounts together. + In some cases, we partner with Third Party Services that may provide + information about you. Such information could include, for example, your + gender, if you have disclosed that information to that third party and made + it available for Tumblr to access. To the extent we obtain such + information, we may use it to develop new Services or to improve or enhance + the Services. User Content: