User talk:Kgoncalves10/sandbox

hey kaylin

--hey-- Amy Tournas (talk) 19:18, 19 March 2020 (UTC)

Feedback from Team FootSense on your sandbox:

Hey Piece and Harmony Team,

Your IRAC scenario is obviously very extensive and applicable to your LEAP project - so good job! One thing that I would expand on is the analysis of your IRAC, give a reasoning why you are a Model Benefit Corporation, what exactly are you offering that falls under "providing underserved communities with specific services and products"? Maybe you can also add to the conclusion: what kind of benefits do you expect to receive? Why would this potentially be the best business formation?

The last thing that I just read in one of the citation modules was to use as little direct citations as possible; you might one to change that if you want. I would also include your main argument "providing services and products to underrepresented communities" in the actual paragraph and not just in the IRAC.

But again, only minor things -- looking good peace and harmony!